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A 50last Art Review by The-Flying-Penguin A 50last Art Review by The-Flying-Penguin
This is my personal take on some of the visual issues with the 50last... The writing in the comics that Sealboy contributed to is brilliant, so I'm not even touching on that. (He didn't help with comic #1....)

I love that a lot of people really like the 50last. It's important to see past flaws, even GLARING ones.
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Da-Pepper-family Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011
i must say ive been a fan of your comic. I love it! it had many characters and was very masterfully done. I loved the plot and the characters! And as an aspiring cartoonist i am very grateful of your tips and ill be sure to keep it to heart as i start my own. I am glad to say your material has opened my mind to the possibility of doing what you have done here. My only regret is that you have not continued your comic, but i respect your decision and wont press it. thanks!
SAMDOBB Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010
that last panel reminds of a reaper from starcraft
rich591 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, nothing's perfect. What I do appreciate is that you don't try to hide the comic's problems, but rather throw them out there so that you can tackle them. Good on ya mate!
Weasel102 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
Well, you do have a few points there, for sure. Even if some things came out bad, I enjoyed, and still enjoy, the comic. A lot. :D Great comic man, keep up the good work, and keep evaluating and making it better. It'll help yourself, as well as the comic.
ToaNovu Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
*Hands you fire extinguisher*
trulyquixotical Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
God TFP is so cute, flying around with that little jetpack <333

This seems to be the thing with comics; you don't ever notice that something's off/doesn't work for a very long time. When I first started drawing 'comics' there were huge amounts of space between 'panels'. askdjfls they looked so bad, it's embarrassing to look back on. But hey, I've improved! XD
Chitter-Box-Kat Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
*splashes water on your butt* Your comic is one of the few things that keeps me interested in Star Wars. Clone Troopers for the win! The advice is well-received. Molto grazzie~
NatefanA98 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
LOL! I just about died laughing when I read, "My butt is on fire". A very clever touch of humor. =D
shadowkitty94 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010
OMG you're alive! *happy squee* And is that duck roast I smell cooking?
Zimeta Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Reminds me of when my sisters and I started ~Goons-And-A-Bandit. The early pages are such garbage. Hehe.
Coincidentally, my butt is on fire, too.
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